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Varun TokasAIR 117· 2023

Question 3(b) continuationGS2GS2

"Cultivation of mind should be the ultimate aim of human existence" - Dr. B.R. Ambedkar (Continuation)

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4Endows leadership capability for bringing social change

BJP Dadabhai Naoroji's "Drain theory" shaped economic discourse of 1900s

5Leads to inclusive growth and giving back to community

BJP Philanthropy of Bill Gates

6Creates positive feedback loop
EducationQuality of lifeQuality employment
7Fosters teamwork and debate instead of violence and behavior

If democratic principles are based on critical thinking and proper education of the individual.

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Conclusion

If democratic principles are based on critical thinking and proper education of the individual.

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Diagram

Feedback loop diagram: Education → Quality of life → Quality employment

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Varun Tokas

AIR 1172023

Subject & Paper

GS2GS2

Topic

Social Sector Services - Health, Education, Human Resources

Education

Role of education in social transformation and democracy

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analytical

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