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The most pressing issue: -
1The safety of the individuals in and around the building. I would address it first at human lives are at stake → Would approach the Mr. Y and explain to him the gravity & the situation & required changes
2Second priority would be approaching buildings department for new permit / low & alleged their to deficiencies in their regulations.
3Would approach and examine the buildings as well as my from (say X's)
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Hrishikesh Alase
AIR 61
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GS4GS2
Topic
Issues relating to Poverty and Hunger
Poverty and Malnutrition
Poverty and Malnutrition
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