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Harshdeep SagarAIR 299· 2025

Question Q.1GS2GS2

To what extent, in your opinion, have the ideals of the Preamble been realised in the country's 75-year constitutional journey?

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Introduction

'India's alter ego Arpadi ka Mahan Ullaw' but we need to reject if we got issue independence or not.

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Main Body

'India's alter ego Arpadi ka Mahan Ullaw' but we need to reject if we got issue independence or not.

India's progress in 75 years constitutional journey

(i) Economic equality: Gini coefficient reduced to 0.2 [PBRT]

(ii) Women's equality: 33% reservation in Institutions : 142.7. Female LFPR [LPFS]

(iii) Secularism: Equal distance + principled distance followed

(iv) Democracy: ECI eliminated 16 lac elections; 400+ state legislature elections

(v) Unity and integrity: Ek Bharat Sheeta Abhyas mission, unification by common institutions.

but also face challenges

1Poverty: 11% multidimensional (NITI Aayog)
2SC/ST discrimination? (69% data request showcase [EP/AT])
3Religious Tensions: Waqf bill protests : Accusation of saffarization
4Democracy and Elections: 48% criminalization [ADP] : Recent chandjimark. Mayoral election fraud
5Social Inequality + Economic inequality: (a) Tribal - still displaced for projects

Way forward:

i) More representative government needed

ii) Inclusive growth model [NITI Aayog] : Hence, India need to Visit Ararat @ 2047, needs premise to be realised and add 'tale to Progress'

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Conclusion

Hence, India need to Visit Ararat @ 2047, needs premise to be realized and add 'tale to Progress'

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Examiner score
0.75/10

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Topper

Harshdeep Sagar

AIR 2992025

Subject & Paper

GS2GS2

Topic

Indian Constitution - Historical Underpinnings, Evolution, Features, Amendments, Significant Provisions and Basic Structure

Preamble

Ideals of the Preamble realisation

Writing Stats

202

Total words

15

Paragraphs

analytical

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