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DEVANSH SARSWATAIR 221· 2025

Question Q.10 (cont.)GS2GS2

While the Gulf region offers lucrative job opportunities, the Indian diaspora often finds itself grappling with severe challenges. Analyse.

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Human Rights violations due to Kafala system;

2. Lack of access to social security

3. Discrimination

4. Inadequate insurance facilities

5. Difficulty in sending remittances

6. No multiple entry/exit options - forced to remain there far from family

7. Access to capital, job security formal contractual mechanisms

8. Lack of awareness of local laws and rights

Way Forward:

5. Engaging with partner to formulate social security measures

Labour identification and registration

5. Support by embassies

Long-term cooperation agreements on migrants must be central part of CEPA negotiations.
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Long-term cooperation agreements on migrants must be central part of CEPA negotiations.

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DEVANSH SARSWAT

AIR 2212025

Subject & Paper

GS2GS2

Topic

Effect of Policies of Developed/Developing Countries and Indian Diaspora

Indian Diaspora and Gulf Relations

Labour Rights and Policy Interventions

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