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AnshulAIR 22· 2023

Question 19GS2GS2

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Introduction

India will be a different power. - Indira Gandhi. The world today stands at the cusp of transformation. The old world order is giving way to the new. It is an aged uncertainty. According to Anthony Albanese, India and Australia are close strategic partners with shared values of democracy, peace and common wealth traditions.

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'India will be a different power.' - Indira Gandhi.

The world today stands at the cusp of transformation. The old world order is giving way to the new. It is an aged uncertainty.

Crisis in multilateralism
Conflict in Europe
Great power rivalry in Asia
Global slowdown
Food, energy and resources crises

In such case, India with its rich cultural values stands as a beacon guiding the world.

(Role of Culture) - Indian values of brotherhood, peace and solidarity. India's 4 to

Vision of One world, one family, one future holds sallens for the world.

Diaspora - Honble PM called them as unofficial ambassadors of India. Driven Indian interest, and leading people to people interaction adding to India's foreign policy.

Demography - India's demographic mature and thus holds special appeal amongst the world. It is an inevitable part of India's soft power.

But soft power in itself is not-enough, it needs to be combined with hard power to give effect to Imminent power .

India with its fifth layern economy and third layern army holds a formulable place in the world.

India with its fifth layern economy and third layern army holds a formulable place in the world. It has been able to secure its interest own face and change the world order.

But much can be improved, India remains highest importer of weapon. Indigenisation of weapon, better integration of the armed force, theroy-sation of civil-military-industrial complex etc can be used to harvest India's smart power.

India can guide the world out of present geopolitical crisis and lay the foundation of a multipolar world order guided by rules.

According to Anthony Albanese, India and Australia are close strategic partners with shared values of democracy, peace and common wealth traditions.

The recently concluded ECTA is a testimony to the close friendship that born the Lamb enjoy.

India has a sizable diaspora in Australia who migrate there for better educational and job opportunities.

Australia too has recently announced stirring up of two universities in GIFT city. Ahmedabad as

military exercise (MMBBAR, CORPAT) containing a belligerent China.

A multipolar, international rules based order.
Technology transfer, Research and 4ive collaboration

But there are some problems like

Racism paid with Indian diaspora
AUKUS - seem to displace QUAD
ON data localisation and e-commerce trade
Huge trade balance within China of Australia.

Despite all these challenges springing of graded values and vibrant people to people commision between India and Australia create a fresh ground for governing long lasting trade relation.

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Conclusion

India can guide the world out of present geopolitical crisis and lay the foundation of a multipolar world order guided by rules. Despite all these challenges springing of graded values and vibrant people to people commision between India and Australia create a fresh ground for governing long lasting trade relation.

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  • Strong opening with relevant quote
  • Contextualizes current global challenges
  • Clear identification of India's unique positioning
  • Good use of contemporary affairs
  • Good integration of multiple dimensions of power
  • Mentions diaspora's role effectively
  • Distinguishes between soft and hard power
  • Acknowledges need for balance
  • Addresses gaps in current military capacity
  • Proposes concrete improvements (indigenisation, integration)
  • Strong conclusion linking India's role to global order
  • Balanced perspective on challenges and opportunities
  • Uses current political leader's statement
  • Mentions recent agreement (ECTA)
  • Notes diaspora contributions
  • References new investments
  • Identifies key areas of cooperation (military exercises)
  • Lists concrete challenges
  • Mentions QUAD vs AUKUS issue
  • Balanced assessment of relationship

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Anshul

AIR 222023

Subject & Paper

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Topic

Comparison of Indian Constitutional Scheme with Other Countries

India's Role in Global Affairs

India's cultural values and soft power

Writing Stats

528

Total words

19

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philosophical and analytical

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