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Preetam KumarAIR 9

Question 17ExamineGS1GS1

Examine whether globalisation is a beneficial force or it erodes communities and widens the gap between the elites and the rest of the world.

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Introduction

Hlobalisation is the continuous exchange of ideas, people, services, across the borders of national or a single entity.

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Main Body

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Hlobalisation is the continuous exchange of ideas, people, services, across the borders of national or a single entity.

Globalisation may been called a two- edged sword which have both negative and positive aspects.

Benefits of globalisation

It may lead to speeding up modernisation of country

It may provided new market avenues to the domestic traders

exchange of technology has led to unprecedented progress in industries

Political values like democracy, equality had found ground in regressive societies
progressive value like women's freedom and equality had found new strength
New jobs have been created in different sectors

Disadvantages

Increase in nuclear families in India is often attributed to globalization which erodes the traditional family values
Rise in divorce is another issue eroding the pious marriage bond of Indian society
the gap between poor and rich has increased where 11. of Indian wealth is concentrated in 1% of population
crime against women in workplace has increased which is a consequence of globalization
The increased competition in education and jobs has led to stress and suicides
The 9 to 5 culture has eroded family values of Indians where parent miss spending time with children

The regulation of globalization to use it to our advantage is the need of the hour

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Conclusion

The regulation of globalization to use it to our advantage is the need of the hour

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  • Balanced discussion
  • Covers economic, social, and political dimensions
  • Specific disadvantages

Answer DNA

Reusable pieces worth remembering

opening

Hlobalisation is the continuous exchange of ideas, people, services...

transition

Globalisation may been called a two- edged sword...

ethical point

equality

conclusion

The regulation of globalization to use it to our advantage is the need of the hour

Examiner score
6.5/10

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Topper

Preetam Kumar

AIR 9

Subject & Paper

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Topic

Globalization and Social Empowerment

Effects of Globalization

Globalisation - benefits and disadvantages

Writing Stats

215

Total words

8

Paragraphs

6

Bullets

analytical

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