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Preetam KumarAIR 9

Question 11ElucidateGS1GS1

Communalism is not only manifested in the rise of terrorism but also in the rising intolerance to cultural diversity world over. Elucidate with recent examples.

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1. The Christ church shooting in newzeland was against Muslims by a Christian

2. The srilankan bombing of the church (2019) was against Christian as a retaliation of Christ church these all shows the communal - Sun and its manifestation in terrorism but communalism has also manifested itself in intolerance

3. The xenophobia in European countries and rise in Right extremist political leadership is a evidence of rising intolerance towards other races and migrants

The mob lynching incidents in India against muslims for consuming beef is a deplorable example of intolerance.
Targeting of minority groups on social media and violence against them during elections by hindus is another manifestation.
Godhra riot, mazafarnpur riot, Babri masjid demolition are all indicating a rising intolerance.

The need is to strive for a peaceful and prosperous society that has always existed as inherently in ancient India.

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The need is to strive for a peaceful and prosperous society that has always existed as inherently in ancient India.

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  • Good international and national examples
  • Connects terrorism and intolerance

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Christchurch shooting

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peaceful and prosperous society

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The need is to strive for a peaceful and prosperous society...

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Preetam Kumar

AIR 9

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Globalization and Social Empowerment

Communalism

Intolerance and examples

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