Question 8Illustrate citing reasonsGS1GS1

India has seen a monumental shift in family system and its values. Illustrate citing reasons for the same.

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Introduction

India is one of the oldest civilis ation and its Family system has been unique and a conne stome of this long civilisation

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India is one of the oldest civilis ation and its Family system has been unique and a conne stome of this long civilisation

Change in Family System

India has witnessed rise in nuclear families in last few decades

The decision maker of the house is the breadwinner and not the oldest of the family

The influence of elder on youth is weakened and individualism is strengthening in youth

The status of women in family has changed significantly and she is considered an equal now

Both parents working is a common site now

Single parent family are increasing

Live-in relationships are being accepted.

# Reasons

Rise in urbanisation where family are more nuclear and

Rising globalisation & hence exchange of idea & values

Rising industrialization where working youth are more free.

Increasing materialism in Indian society

despite this India has managed to preserve the core aspect of its family system.

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Conclusion

despite this India has managed to preserve the core aspect of its family system.

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Lists multiple changes and reasons
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opening

India is one of the oldest civilis ation and its Family system has been unique...

transition

Change in Family System

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core aspect

conclusion

despite this India has managed to preserve the core aspect of its family system.

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Preetam Kumar

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Indian Society

Family system

Changes and reasons

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