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Preetam KumarAIR 9

Question 6DiscussGS1GS1

Discuss how culture of toxic masculinity in Indian society has exacerbated social conflict and injustice?

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Introduction

India has been a crucible of civilizations with tolerance as its inherent value but in recent times it has been challenged.

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India has been a crucible of civilizations with tolerance as its inherent value but in recent times it has been challenged.

The culture of toxic masculinity where the on has more muscle inflict pain and injustice on the feeble.

Culture of toxic masculinity - the incidence of mob lynching where the lower caste or muslim are lynched for apparently no compelling reason

Fuming riots by political parties against different caste like Yadavs in Uttar Pradesh
55 words3 paragraphs2 bullet points
  • Connects toxic masculinity to social conflicts
  • Uses examples

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India has been a crucible of civilizations with tolerance as its inherent value...

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The culture of toxic masculinity...

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mob lynching

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justice

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Page 13

Topper

Preetam Kumar

AIR 9

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Indian Society

Social issues

Toxic masculinity

Writing Stats

76

Total words

3

Paragraphs

2

Bullets

analytical

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