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Preetam KumarAIR 9

Question 5What, what measuresGS1GS1

What are the various issues faced by urban slums in India? What measures can be adopted to improve the living conditions in urban slums in India?

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Introduction

India currently have 327 of its population in urban areas (cent 2011) and it is expected to be 667. by 2050.

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India currently have 327 of its population in urban areas (cent 2011) and it is expected to be 667. by 2050.

And a significant population in urban areas live in slums

# Issues

They are highly unhygienic and breeds diseases

Crimes in slum is uncontrolled

Poor amenities like electricity, water etc

Facilities like schools, hospi tals are @ hard to find

They are over populated

Jobs for the poor are few off and unsatisfying.

# Meaures

Promotion of schemes like Aroa Vojana to give them better home with all amenities
Planned city development to prevent future slum growth
Schemes like Sarva Sikhsa Abhiyan and Ayushman Rharat must find their way in slums growth

Persons like Jean Dreze must be a guiding light in empathising and developing the slums

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Conclusion

Persons like Jean Dreze must be a guiding light in empathising and developing the slums

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  • Lists issues and measures
  • Mentions multiple schemes

Answer DNA

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opening

India currently have 327 of its population in urban areas...

transition

And a significant population in urban areas live in slums

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empathising and developing

conclusion

Persons like Jean Dreze must be a guiding light...

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Page 11

Topper

Preetam Kumar

AIR 9

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Social Issues

Urbanization

Urban slums

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131

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