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Preetam KumarAIR 9

Question 4CommentGS1GS1

The 'disabled' in India need to be transformed into 'differently abled' for them to be a participant in the development process. Comment.

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Introduction

According to census 2011, India has nearly 2.51 as differently abled population

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According to census 2011, India has nearly 2.51 as differently abled population

Disability though as much as it is a physical problem, it is more of a social problem.

The disability among them is created by social hurdles like unfriendly infrastructure and stigma with disability

The perception & towards them need to be changed and they must be seen as contributors in 'sabka sath, sabla vical'

The Accessible India Campaign is a step towards it and the following step must be taken.

Public infra should be friendly

The digital platform should be disabled friendly and instruct on by voice should be the way ahead

The belief among disabled to be especially abled to will give new heights to the potential they have and contribute to the development

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Conclusion

The belief among disabled to be especially abled to will give new heights to the potential they have and contribute to the development

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  • Recognizes social dimension of disability
  • Mentions Accessible India Campaign

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According to census 2011, India has nearly 2.51 as differently abled population

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Disability though as much as it is a physical problem, it is more of a social problem.

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sabka sath, sabla vical

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The belief among disabled to be especially abled...

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Page 9

Topper

Preetam Kumar

AIR 9

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Social Issues

Social Empowerment

Disability and inclusion

Writing Stats

150

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5

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analytical

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