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Preetam KumarAIR 9

Question 30Present a case, analyseGS1GS1

Present a case for reform in the functioning of the United Nations. Also, analyse the limitations of the United Nations in peacekeeping operations Worldwide.

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Introduction

United Nation wad established by the UN charngg signed in 1945 to prevent any future wad like the wot I & wot in the past

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United Nation wad established by the UN charngg signed in 1945 to prevent any future wad like the wot I & wot in the past

Cage for Reform in UN

The power equations of 1945 are the basis of representation in the UN Security council, which has now experienced a sea change.

Countries like India, Brazil, Japan are new economic powerhouses of world and needs to be repelled and adequately.

Excessive authority to the UNsc and in that to the Permanent 5 has led to suppression of many

Misuse of UN to further one member's interest has created a nucleus in Iraq since 2003.

The track record of UN is Chequered but the need of reform is undeniable.

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Conclusion

The track record of UN is Chequered but the need of reform is undeniable.

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  • Identifies need for reform
  • Mentions specific countries

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The track record of UN is Chequered but the need of reform is undeniable.

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Page 101

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Preetam Kumar

AIR 9

Subject & Paper

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Topic

World History

International organizations

UN reform

Writing Stats

133

Total words

4

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