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The American Revolution declaration of 1776 influenced the political events of the later times and left an everlasting legacy in times to come. Comment.

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Introduction

American Revolution was a unprecedented event of rising of colonists against the imperialist and overthrown them.

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Main Body

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American Revolution was a unprecedented event of rising of colonists against the imperialist and overthrown them.

The declaration of 1776 was issued during the revolution which later became part of the 'Bill of Rights' to

Influence of declaration of 1776

It for 1st time exhibited the rights of the citizens like Right to self-determination, freedom of speech etc.
The ideals like democracy resonated in future life in French Revolution
It expedited the process of decolonization in the After Latin & South Americas
Ideals of Nationalism shook the foundation of feudal order in Europe soon.

Thus the Declaration had a everlasting impact and has significance yet today.

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Conclusion

Thus the Declaration had a everlasting impact and has significance yet today.

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  • Lists multiple influences
  • Strong conclusion

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opening

American Revolution was a unprecedented event...

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Influence of declaration of 1776

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self-determination, freedom of speech

conclusion

Thus the Declaration had a everlasting impact...

Examiner score
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Preetam Kumar

AIR 9

Subject & Paper

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Topic

World History

American Revolution

Declaration of 1776

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110

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