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Preetam KumarAIR 9

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The bhakti and sufi movements of medieval India influenced the moral structure more than the social structure of Indian society. Comment.

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Bhakti and sufi movements were two selfigious movements that took place in medieval India

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Bhakti and sufi movements were two selfigious movements that took place in medieval India

Influence on social structure

> Inequalities were shunned by the followers of these two

> Fraternity among all was core idea of sufi movement

> Religious practices were made personal affair than the involvement of others

Influence on moral structures

> Caste- based discrimination was declared immoral by these movement

> patriarchy was challenged

> equal rights of women were propagated

> child marriages were looked down upon

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  • Distinguishes between social and moral influence
  • Lists specific moral reforms

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Bhakti and sufi movements were two selfigious movements that took place in medieval India

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equal rights of women

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Preetam Kumar

AIR 9

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Indian Culture

Bhakti and Sufi movements

Social and moral influence

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