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Question 16DiscussGS1GS1

Discuss how drug abuse is a menace that affects individuals, families, and the nation.

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3promotes domestic racism like & domestic violence. 4) encourages children to take up drugs. 5) Demographic Disaster 6) As youth of nation is not productively contributing to economy 7) Increase state expenditure on rehab camps, awareness drives etc 8) Affects international opportunities & image. Drug abuse affects the entire lifecycle of an individual.
9Poor skills & health poor learning outcome. 10) Family. 11) Inability to feed for a family, becomes 'bare branches'.
1Awareness campaigns to be strengthened eg: Nisha Mukti campaign by ministry of social justice 2) Set up rehabilitation camps for affected people 3) Greater acceptance amongst society for people who have got aid of this habit. 4) Crackdown on illegal drug sellers in & around universities & colleges 5) Community participation & roping in awareness & behavioral change. 6) Effective border surveillance to check drug inflow from Golden Triangle & Golden Crescent.

Drug abuse is a menace that eats away into individual, family & national life and should be tackled root & cause.

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Drug abuse is a menace that eats away into individual, family & national life and should be tackled root & cause.

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  • Covers individual, family, and national impacts
  • Suggests solutions

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Topper

Mehak Jain

AIR 17

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Social Issues

Health

Drug abuse

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168

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7

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6

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