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DIKSHA JOSHIAIR 19

Question 3CommentGS1GS1

The Indian freedom struggle was not a war of bullets rather a war of ideologies. Comment.

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3Denial of self- determination and responsible government to guidance. 1927- protest against Simon commission

(b) Difference in ideologies of guidance leaders

① Moderates vs Extremist: use of constitutional means, prayer, petition & protest against idea of extra-constitutional struggle

② Violence vs Non-violence: Between Rise and Gavel

③ Dominion vs Ruuna Swanal: As seen Status during Nehru Report 1928.

Thus, freedom struggle was not only a vain of independence but also a phase of evolution of (id) and conflict of ideas that shape. our present status.

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Thus, freedom struggle was not only a vain of independence but also a phase of evolution of (id) and conflict of ideas that shape. our present status.

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  • Good categorization of ideological differences

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Difference in ideologies of guidance leaders

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Moderates vs Extremist

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Thus, freedom struggle was not only a vain of independence but also a phase of evolution of (id) and conflict of ideas that shape. our present status.

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DIKSHA JOSHI

AIR 19

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Freedom Struggle

Ideological dimensions

War of ideologies

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86

Total words

5

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3

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