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Abhinav J JainAIR 14· 2023

Question 4How far do you agreeGS1GS1

How far do you agree that accepting nation-states as reality of the twenty-first century can help aid in the fight against religious fanaticism and fundamentalism?

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Introduction

Recent power change in Afghanistan and forces of ISIS in west Asia shows increase tendency of fundamentalism and religious fanaticism in world. In 21st century.

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Recent power change in Afghanistan and forces of ISIS in west Asia shows increase tendency of fundamentalism and religious fanaticism in world. In 21st century.

Accepting nation states as reality can help in fight against religious fanaticism & fundamentalism as

1Satellite demand for political autonomy and decrease violence, terror.
2Recognition of national aspiration & people based on common culture, religion, language, ethnicity etc.
3Reduce radicalisation tendencies and promote peaceful world order.
4Protect cultural diversity across geographical

However, it is a slippery slope having more threats than app structures as'

1Esumballing effect- As it'll lead to further design effect of newer demands of theistation in India.
2New bone of counterins & borders disputes based on other differences

e- ciallase- anddlist in Bri lauta - suia- sunni dicit de in indele east

3Increase majoritariem in unstead of economic majority

e- Bilingua's of euchian in Myanma

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This global community needs to take new look to nation- state demands as it cannot be panacea and explore cultural contact, political decentralization to preserve, protect religious identities

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Conclusion

This global community needs to take new look to nation- state demands as it cannot be panacea and explore cultural contact, political decentralization to preserve, protect religious identities

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  • Balanced analysis with both pros and cons
  • Uses contemporary examples
  • Recognizes limitations of nation-state model

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Recent power change in Afghanistan and forces of ISIS in west Asia shows increase tendency of fundamentalism and religious fanaticism in world.

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However, it is a slippery slope having more threats than app structures

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explore cultural contact, political decentralization to preserve, protect religious identities

conclusion

This global community needs to take new look to nation- state demands as it cannot be panacea and explore cultural contact, political decentralization to preserve, protect religious identities

Examiner score
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Abhinav J Jain

AIR 142023

Subject & Paper

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Topic

8. Globalization and Social Empowerment

Social Empowerment

Nation-states and religious fundamentalism

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211

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9

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7

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analytical

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