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Indian culture got as much influenced by foreign cultures as it has influenced them. Discuss.

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Indian culture is quite a'c culture with multiple values, practices that have emerged during long Indian history since media valley civilization

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Indian culture is quite a'c culture with multiple values, practices that have emerged during long Indian history since media valley civilization

Indian culture influenced by foreign cultures

1Islamic trade is in lively after mughal, belli sultanate (medieval period)

2Foods like samosa, mughal cuisine -induslian agriculture, painting

2Paris's influence in adding cultural diversity, bolliowie.

3European culture in colonial times leads to westernisation & secular values becoming ill guldian culture (4) Social reform movements for introducing but, modern Remarriage.

4Rebalisation in modern times in creating cultural influence.

Indian culture influencing other culture

1scientific developments by Aryabhatta, Sushruta helped national science develop new in west

2Chinese, South East Asian Culture influenced by Indian Buddhist traditions.

3Ta Heini, Huien Tsong, as cultural

3western culture inspiring from Indian values like family norms/jointness), solidarity, practices like yoga widely adopted

This present day Globalised era, mainly Spirit of India's culture of Vasudev Kuthumbhan 2. Surya Bhargava Sushilav to restore peace, humanity in world.

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Conclusion

This present day Globalised era, mainly Spirit of India's culture of Vasudev Kuthumbhan 2. Surya Bhargava Sushilav to restore peace, humanity in world.

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Indian culture is quite a'c culture with multiple values, practices that have emerged during long Indian history since media valley civilization

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Indian culture influenced by foreign cultures

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scientific developments by Aryabhatta, Sushruta helped national science develop new in west

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Vasudev Kuthumbhan to restore peace, humanity

conclusion

This present day Globalised era, mainly Spirit of India's culture of Vasudev Kuthumbhan 2. Surya Bhargava Sushilav to restore peace, humanity in world.

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Abhinav J Jain

AIR 142023

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1. Indian Culture

Art Forms, Literature and Architecture

Cultural exchange and influences

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