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Abhinav J JainAIR 14· 2023

Question 16DiscussGS1GS1

'Cities are economic powerhouses but they also act as ecological blackholes.' In light of this statement, discuss how the positive and negative aspects of urbanization interact with each other.

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Introduction

India having 30% population living in cities, (201) expected to rise to 50% by 2050 showing challenge and opportunity for India. Is true sustainable cities.

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Main Body

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India having 30% population living in cities, (201) expected to rise to 50% by 2050 showing challenge and opportunity for India. Is true sustainable cities.

Economic powerhouse / Ecological blackhole

centre economic activities
High consumption sustaining youth
High value, productive legitimate sector.
Pollution.
Emission degradation
Global warming through urban land islands

Cities having contadric cities.

slums coexisting with depopulation - poverty coexisting with prosperity - slums coexisting with conformity

Positive aspects:

(i) High. GDP contribution.

(ii) better social indicator - health, education.

(iii) modern values of equality, liberty, more emphasized.

(iv) better standard of living.

Negative aspects of urbanization.

(i) implemented urbanization (leading to rise of slums (1 out of 7 urbanites living in slums in India)

(ii) low & environment sensitivity - deepening green courses, waste and replaced with concrete.

(iii) Issues of social waste management.

Interaction of positive & negative aspects.

(i) Slums - Thugs give access to public resources & live but living standard abnormal. - Poor sanitation, drinking water facilities.

(ii) Families - increase in liberal values, equal treatment to women but excess consumption, individualization leading to mental issues like depression.

(iii) Governance - balancing gender with environment as more need for urbanization consumption.

180 words12 paragraphs10 bullet points
  • Comprehensive coverage of positive and negative aspects
  • Good analysis of interactions
  • Uses data (1 out of 7 urbanites in slums)

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India having 30% population living in cities, (201) expected to rise to 50% by 2050 showing challenge and opportunity for India.

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Economic powerhouse / Ecological blackhole

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1 out of 7 urbanites living in slums in India

Examiner score
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Page 44

Topper

Abhinav J Jain

AIR 142023

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

7. Social Issues

Urbanization, their problems and their remedies

Urbanization - positive and negative aspects

Writing Stats

205

Total words

12

Paragraphs

10

Bullets

analytical

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