Question 3ElaborateGS1GS1

The six days war was not only a humiliation for Arab states, but it also turned Israel's status from being a small state to one of the most powerful regional powers. Elaborate.

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Introduction

Six Day War was within 6 days.

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Six Day War was within 6 days.

1lost was within 6day.

2combined Arab countries (Egypt, Jordan, Syria, Saudi Arab etc.) couldn't defeat Israel.

3lost territories Egypt- Sinai Peninsula Jordan- Jerusalem. d. west Bank- Syria- Colan Nejdik

4showed lack of preparedness, poor coordination between militaries.

Turned Israel's status as one of post- powerful regional powers.

1Technical or process and advanced air force preemptive attacks.

2Captured territory helped institute beginning of 1. 1. 1. 1. 1. 1. 2. 1. 1. 1. 1. 1. 1.

3Made Israel more assertive in its claim of Jewish nation.

late, You Kippur was 1970s showed 1. 1. 1. 1. 1. 1. 1. 2. 1. 1. 1. 1. 1. 1.

The Six Day War transformed Israel's regional status significantly.

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Conclusion

The Six Day War transformed Israel's regional status significantly.

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Identifies key territorial changes
Mentions Israel's military superiority

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opening

Six Day War was within 6 days.

transition

Turned Israel's status as one of post- powerful regional powers.

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Technical or process and advanced air force preemptive attacks.

conclusion

The Six Day War transformed Israel's regional status significantly.

Examiner score

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Topper

Abhinav J Jain

AIR 142023

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

5. World History

World Wars & Redrawal of Boundaries

Six Day War

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