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Aditya Heyday UpadhyayAIR 154· 2023

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In many ways, the Spanish Civil War was the opening act of WWII. Comment.

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Introduction

Spanish Civil War took place during mid 1930s and was struggle between right faction led by Franco and left wing led by communists, socialists.

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Spanish Civil War took place during mid 1930s and was struggle between right faction led by Franco and left wing led by communists, socialists.

How it was start of WWII:

1Hitler and Mussolini: Armed support of hitler including bombings to support right led by franco called allies powers.
2Failure of League of Nations: League of Nations failed to quell Spanish violence and also did not act against hitler for bombings.
3Italy-Germany: After invasion of Abyssinia Proximity Mussolini grew away from west and bent closer to hitler by pledging support to hitler.
4Appeasement by Allies: reluctance by Allies to act against hitler emboldened him to acquisition of Russia and invasion of Poland.

Other factors that led to build: Unfair Treaty of Versailles on Germany, Japan invasion of Manchuria, Anglo-German Naval Agreement

3Italy-Germany: After invasion of Abyssinia Proximity Mussolini grew away from west and bent closer to hitler by pledging support to hitler.
4Appeasement by Allies: reluctance by Allies to act against hitler emboldened him to acquisition of Russia and invasion of Poland.
Unfair Treaty of Versailles on GermanyJapan Invasion of ManchuriaAnglo-German Naval Agreement

Other factors

that led to build

Spanish Civil War represented growing world wide turbulence and signalled the atrocious policy of hitler and Mussolini

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Conclusion

Spanish Civil War represented growing world wide turbulence and signalled the atrocious policy of hitler and Mussolini

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  • Clear structure with numbered points
  • Identifies key actors (Hitler, Mussolini, Franco)
  • Connects Spanish Civil War to broader WWII context

Answer DNA

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opening

Spanish Civil War took place during mid 1930s and was struggle between right faction led by Franco and left wing led by communists, socialists.

transition

How it was start of WWII:

example

Appeasement by Allies: reluctance by Allies to act against hitler emboldened him to acquisition of Russia and invasion of Poland.

conclusion

Spanish Civil War represented growing world wide turbulence and signalled the atrocious policy of hitler and Mussolini

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Aditya Heyday Upadhyay

AIR 1542023

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Topic

5. World History

World wars

World wars

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