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Abhimanyu MalikAIR 60· 2023

Question 3GS1GS1

What are the factors that led to the Russian revolution and what are the consequences of this revolution? Elaborate the influence on the Indian national movement.

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Introduction

Russian revolution occurred in two phases (Feb, 1917 and October, 1917) through a series of diverse that ultimately lead Bolshevik under Lenin coming to power

25 words

Main Body

Causes:

1I World War:
led to drain of resources
2Economic backwardness:
discontent among people
3Discontent among workers & peasants:
tapped by revolutionary leaders
by Menshevik & Bolsheviks
4Demand for political reforms:
by intellectuals

Way forward

Short-term:

Role of NGOs, civil society for harmony
Banning of religious outfits
Checking hate speech

Long-term:

Inclusive growth & development
Value-based education
Eradicate primary journey & unemployment
77 words7 paragraphs11 bullet points
  • Clear chronological presentation of two phases of revolution
  • Identifies multiple causal factors
  • Mentions key revolutionary groups (Bolsheviks, Mensheviks)
  • Links World War I to economic consequences
  • Differentiates between short-term and long-term solutions
  • Covers institutional, legislative, and developmental approaches
  • Holistic perspective on addressing root causes

Topper

Abhimanyu Malik

AIR 602023

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

History of the World - Political Philosophies and Revolutions

Russian Revolution and its Global Impact

Russian Revolution - Causes, Consequences, and Impact on Indian Nationalism

Writing Stats

102

Total words

7

Paragraphs

11

Bullets

prescriptive and solution-oriented

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