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Aakash Om TrivediAIR 73· 2024

Question 3GS1GS1

Discuss the role played by Indians living abroad in advancing the cause of India's freedom struggle. (Answer in 150 words)

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Main Body

'At I Indian across globe play their role for India—liberation'

Romila Thapar

Role played by Indian abroad

1Raise Indian Zeal in western world

Eg: Dattabhai Naorji, British parliament raise India Zeal

2Organization: for Indian national movement support eg (Swami) Vivekananda India labour
3Zimmerman plan: for India Independence in 1914+
4Chanai party: provide fund, teaching personnel for revolutionary activities
5Madam Cama: senior Indian fugge Maadhavnagar
70 words7 paragraphs1 bullet points
  • Opens with relevant quote from historian Romila Thapar
  • Names specific freedom fighters who worked abroad (Dattabhai Naorji, Swami Vivekananda, Madam Cama)
  • Attempts to categorize contributions (raising awareness, organization, funding, diplomatic efforts)
  • References Zimmerman plan and 1914 period

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Aakash Om Trivedi

AIR 732024

Subject & Paper

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Topic

The Freedom Struggle — its various stages and important contributors/contributions from different parts of the country

Freedom Struggle - Diaspora Role

Indians Abroad and Independence Movement

Writing Stats

70

Total words

7

Paragraphs

1

Bullets

Formal with attempt at structured format

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