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Vipulbhai Karmanbhai ChaudharyAIR 115· 2024

Question 3GS1GS1

Discuss the role played by Indians living abroad in advancing the cause of India's freedom struggle. (Answer in 150 words)

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Introduction

India's freedom struggle is known as mass spectacular mass and (inclusive) movement which not only sheen courage & indians at home but also abroad also.

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Main Body

India's freedom struggle is known as mass spectacular mass and (inclusive) movement which not only sheen courage & indians at home but also abroad also.

Indians at abroad - country-wide combatting.

1EUROPE:

1.i) Madam Bhikaji Kuma revolutionacy activity at london, partis and raising forumand consciousness set international feun (aa) germany summit 1905 - notable flag.

1.b) Shyamji Krishnaverma.

*) India House and Home Rule society.

*) Institutionalised revolutionary movement.

*) V.D. Savarkar also participated.

1.c) Gendranath chatartyalger 'Independence league'

Challenges noted:

1Safe transport system (ex) Nirbhaya Undet
2Absence of someplace safety (ex) R.D.Ege indaict (Westongal)
3Poor recognition of care economy in metro city
4Low women's migration compared to men
5Glass ceiling, glass diet, sticky floor, gender wage gap (21%) and intersectional gap
6Survey highlighted - sometimes are epilata of enmer (19 metropolis → 15% of enmer vepahty nexiy)

Steps to take:

1Safe-inclusive transport as per unsey transport policy 2061
2Gender budgeting lunhed at UIs
3Gender inclusive decision making and infra-structure

Patne Rajput Commutia suggested exclusive and sure infrastructu by mandate to patriarchal problem

183 words5 paragraphs
  • Clear identification of key figures in overseas freedom struggle
  • Reference to specific organizations (India House, Home Rule Society)
  • Mention of European context
  • Attempt to show institutional organization
  • Identified specific data points (21% wage gap, 19 metropolis)
  • Connected infrastructure to social issues
  • Suggested policy interventions

Topper

Vipulbhai Karmanbhai Chaudhary

AIR 1152024

Subject & Paper

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Topic

Modern Indian History from about the middle of the eighteenth century until the present

The Freedom Struggle

Indians Abroad and the Freedom Struggle

Writing Stats

208

Total words

5

Paragraphs

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