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Varun TokasAIR 117

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Globalization has brought new opportunities as well as challenges for children in India. Examine.

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Introduction

Globalization has given rise to the "Gen Z" which are increasingly digitally literate and more dependent on global culture and values in their decision-making.

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Main Body

Globalization has given rise to the "Gen Z" which are increasingly digitally literate and more dependent on global culture and values in their decision-making.

This can have negative impact on children

1Digital dependence has created "iPad kids" who are spending too much time on devices causing issues like:
Cyberbullying
low interest in learning
Myopia from overuse of mobiles
2Rise of social media has resulted in body dysmorphia, online bullying and anxiety in children
3Rise in ultra-processed foods in chain like McDonalds are increasing childhood

obesity

4Security threats from online radicalizing of children due to lacking digital safety
5Nuclear families are increasing making it hard for parents to balance work with parenting
Negative impact on child development
6Decreasing physical activity leads to Poor posture → muscle pain etc.

However it also has positive effects

1Rise in global consciousness promotes social reform in caste ism and communalism
2Increases digital literacy makes Indian youth "future ready" and more skilled in employment.
3Access to foreign goods increases access to global goods and promotes equality of life
4Social media increases connect of children to friends and family
5Family nuclearization leads to reduced internal conflicts leading to a healthy childhood.
6Increased opportunities for girls in education and employment have raised gender parity in primary education is.
7Breaker children's autonomy promotes mental development and builds character.

The benefits of globalization to India's children are crucial in realizing the dream of Digital India.

© Promoting vocational education in schools and midday meal - to increase attendance

© Development of entrepreneurship in manufacturing and IT under PM MUDRA and SIDBI grants

© Increasing insurance penetration in urban poor population by PM JDY and free primary care

© Enforcement of societal and legal safeguards like NAAMAZTE to prevent employment in hazardous sector

Urban poverty is a crucial issue to resolve in reaching a $5 trillion economy.

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Conclusion

The benefits of globalization to India's children are crucial in realizing the dream of Digital India.

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  • Contemporary examples (iPad kids, Gen Z terminology)
  • Mentions specific health issues (myopia, body dysmorphia)
  • Covers multiple dimensions (digital, social, nutritional)
  • Balanced coverage of challenges and opportunities
  • Mentions security concerns relevant to children
  • Connects globalization to social reform
  • Covers multiple domains (health, social, economic)
  • Concludes with national vision (Digital India)
  • Positive framing of globalization benefits
  • Mentions gender-related improvements
  • Notes autonomy benefits
  • Mentions multiple relevant schemes
  • Connects urban poverty to macro-economic goal
  • Covers education, employment, insurance

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Topper

Varun Tokas

AIR 117

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Effects of Globalization on Indian society

Globalisation and technology, Miscellaneous

Impact of globalization on children in India

Writing Stats

363

Total words

20

Paragraphs

Descriptive, contemporary, issue-focused

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