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Srishti MishraAIR 95· 2023

Question 20 (continued)GS1GS1

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from becoming visible at workplace, but no such legislation applies to the workplace household.

2Implicit patriarchy at workplace due to greater application of laws: e.g. application of the POSJ Act prevents patriarchy
3Higher violence at home than at workplace due to privacy offered at home and as opposed to action taken at workplace: e.g. domestic violence.
4Differential private and public morals: i.e. an man can be very conceivable and empowering at the workplace but the same principles may not apply at home.
5Added advantage of financial empowerment at workplace makes a woman more confident in standing up against it whereas, at home lack of other opportunities may render a woman powerless as to counter act discrimination.

Thus, patriarchy is a vice in many forms. It must be attacked in all places to truly get rid of the ideological misconception of truly empower the women of India.

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  • Systematic analysis of differences
  • References legal framework (POSJ Act)
  • Identifies role of financial independence
  • Addresses violence and safety dimensions
  • Discusses public-private distinction
  • Strong concluding statement
  • Advocates for systemic change
  • Emphasizes need for multifaceted approach

Topper

Srishti Mishra

AIR 952023

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Role of Women and Women's Organization, Population and Associated Issues

Patriarchy and Gender Dynamics

Patriarchy Impact on Workplace vs Household

Writing Stats

150

Total words

5

Paragraphs

concluding and prescriptive

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