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Srishti MishraAIR 95· 2023

Question 8GS1GS1

How does fostering pluralism within Indian society contribute to the endeavour of nation-building?

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Introduction

Pluralism is the ideal of multiplicity of cultures and traditions coexisting peacefully

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Main Body

Pluralism is the ideal of multiplicity of cultures and traditions coexisting peacefully. Encouraging pluralism can foster nation building.

Existence of Anti-Pluralist Tendencies:

(i) Increasing polarisation and extremism eg. recent attacks in Haryana showing Hindu-Muslim dichotomy.

(ii) Rise in communalising, hate speech, and cow vigilantism.

(iii) Political polarisation and fragmented [caste-based, religion-based, etc.] eg. BSP is a "lower" caste-based party, CPI is communist.

(iv) Lack of tolerance and rising flame of the other groups/identities.

pluralism can encourage national unity :

(i) celebrating diversity of society instead of separating religious festivals, traditions. eg. Diwali, Eid, Navratri can be celebrated by all.

(ii) Increased tolerance through cultural tourism and exploration creating curiosity incit of historical civilisations, etc.

(iii) Application of culture through secular pedagogy, instilling unity and teamwork in children.

pluralism is a testament to India's age-old custom of acceptance of diversity and difference and encouraging it can foster national unity i.e. Atharvaveda.

150 words10 paragraphs
  • Clear definition of pluralism at the beginning
  • Well-structured with numbered points
  • Uses contemporary examples
  • Identifies specific challenges to pluralism
  • Good use of examples (Diwali, Eid, Navratri)
  • Connects to ancient Indian traditions (Atharvaveda)
  • Practical suggestions through education
  • Clear logical flow of arguments

Topper

Srishti Mishra

AIR 952023

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Salient features of Indian Society, Diversity of India

Pluralism and nation-building

Challenges to pluralism in contemporary Indian society

Writing Stats

162

Total words

10

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