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SHREYA TYAGIAIR 31· 2024

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Introduction

The era of globalization and modernization are bringing about many changes in society, especially massage & family. Continuation of analysis on family structure changes About 22% of Indian population lives in cities. The population is said to touch 200 million by 2050. Continuation on multiple manifestations of unplanned urbanization Ways to correct urbanization - continued

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The era of globalization and modernization are bringing about many changes in society, especially massage & family.

1marriage now being seen as an option, not a necessity -> many people opting out
2traditional massage structures breaking down -> nuclearisation of family
3endogamy vs begit dominate marriage relations
4creation / common spread of 'love massage' -> choice of partner
5family -> nuclearisation -> joint family seal

Role of master & state:

1steady view to urbanisation -> 2/10grams of urbanisation 4-0% -> locationally nuclear
2high cost of city living -> migration -> gifted parents and family stay-behind
3rising educational status -> want -> rising age of massage -> optional for women
4low support of state for family
6families are locationally nuclear functionally joint -> child going up with grand parent
7child bearing & rearing optional -> high cost of childern -> duenadying complex
8Rise of atomistic individual -> self-sufficiency prioritized

Role of master & state:

1Steady view to urbanisation -> 2/10grams of urbanisation 4-0% -> locationally nuclear
2high cost of city living -> migration -> gifted parents and family stay-behind
3rising educational status -> want -> rising age of massage -> optional for women
4low support of state for family

Care - economy gaze on women -> 22% of men the house hold -> 66% on women's -> time use poverty

5Rise of consumerism -> Atomistic individual

about 22% of Indian population lives in cities. The population is said to touch 200 million by 2050.

Rural distress -> Migration to urban -> lack of availability of jobs

Unavailability of jobs -> development of slums, discarded spaces

Fig 1: Unplanned & Unafated Urbanization

Multiple ways of unplanned cities:

1Unplanned urbanisation -> lack of pull factors -> overcrowding
2sanitiation & public water used -> development of slum -> lack of facilities -> spread of discogedy death
3distress urbanisation -> agrarian distress -> prinicaten of agricultte -> raising migrant population to disgrace
4public safety threats -> feeling of anonnality
5biased urbanisation -> concretation -> urban heat island
6Unplanned areas -> most susceptible to disasters -> ref to serrapsais, 2019.

Ways to correct urbanisation:

1Smart city program for city-level planning -> municipal, pucca, puewa, housing, sanitation
2focus on anti-slum measure -> eg affordable rental housing -> singapore model
3de-congesting cities -> eg slum urbanisation, Navi Mumbai, secundrabad
4focus on WASH methods -> eg Swach Bharat Abhiyam - usum
5public connectivity -> eg National Mobility candi supporting infrastructure
6Best practice for cities

a) Reduce pollution -> Beijing

b) housing -> singapore

Note, SDG 11 of sustainable urbanisation needs to be adapted by inclusive growth for all.

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Diagram showing rural distress and unavailability of jobs leading to migration to urban area, which creates lack of availability of jobs and development of slums/discarded spaces. Shows multiple ways of unplanned cities with unplanned urbanization leading to lack of pull factors and overcrowding.

  • systematic enumeration of social changes
  • multi-causal analysis
  • integration of urbanization factors
  • use of statistics (22%, 66%)
  • multi-dimensional analysis of family change
  • attention to gendered dimensions
  • use of diagram to illustrate causal relationships
  • specific demographic data (22%, 200 million by 2050)
  • clear problem identification
  • multi-dimensional analysis of urbanization problems
  • integration of environmental concerns
  • mention of policy solution (Smart Cities)
  • practical policy solutions
  • international examples
  • linkage to SDGs
  • multi-sectoral approach

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Topper

SHREYA TYAGI

AIR 312024

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Globalization and Modernization Effects on Family Structure

Changes in Family and Marriage Patterns

Marriage as Institution and Its Impacts

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513

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11

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analytical, structured with enumeration

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