Question Q.4Comment.GS1GS1

The Arab-Israeli conflict should be understood as a product of both internal dynamics and the outcome of manipulative strategies employed by imperial powers. Comment.

Introduction

Arab-Israeli conflict is an age old battle between Israel & group of countries representing Arab voice in its own, it all started when UN declared Israel a nation & recognized their geographical area to long.

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Main Body

Israel-Arab conflict as internal dynamics

1Frequent tussle between Israelis & Palestinians for their home town

2Head to Head for Jerusalem as their capital, is also one reason

3Creation of Hamas as major grouping showcasing revolutionary terrorism

4Support of neighbours to palestines - their people in repliciting Israel nation

5Right using political conflict between Israelis & palestanians

Conflict as outcome of manipulative strategy by imposed power

1Tense between Israel & Arab transformed to west versus Arab nations

2Supply of weapons of mass distribution by western powers to Israelis

3Ideological conflict between Jews & Arabs at new world level

4To destabilise the middle east region by imperial power

However in all this chaoz, [1948] (Abrahams accord) acts as ray of hope for a peaceful world for all .

5Right using political conflict between Israelis & palestanians

Conflict as outcome of manipulative strategy by imposed power

1Tense between Israel & Arab transformed to west versus Arab nations

2Supply of weapons of mass distribution by western powers to Israelis

3Ideological conflict between Jews & Arabs at new world level

4To destabilise the middle east region by imperial power

However in all this chaoz, [1948] (Abrahams accord) acts as ray of hope for a peaceful, world for all .

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Conclusion

However in all this chaoz, [1948] (Abrahams accord) acts as ray of hope for a peaceful, world for all .

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Clear structure separating internal and external factors
Addresses both components of the question
Mentions Abraham accord as hopeful development
Good numbered structure

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Topper

Saichaitanya Jadhav

AIR 68

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

History of the World

World Wars and International Relations

Arab-Israeli Conflict

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273

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