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As professionals, civil servants are career-focused and are also self-interested. At the same time, their service ethos imposes an obligation to serve the public interest selflessly. Is it possible for a civil servant to reconcile career and service obligation? Explain your position.

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Introduction

"Atmanaa mohaatham jaagritayaaha" (For the salvation of individual self as per the Bhakti Sufi tradition, this motto of Ramakrishna Mission can be equally applied for civil services as it provides unique excellent opportunity for both individual growth & societal development

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Main Body

Possibility to reconcile both career & service obligations:

1Dedication to public service at all levels in strug & also as a means for career growth in Indian civil services
2The excellent public servants who achieve unthinkable are always recognised by the government
3Compassionate & efficient civil servants doing their service selflessly are always

[continued on next page - mentions multiple points about reconciliation, media role as a public model for younger generation, sufficient internal mechanism within service itself like selection committees, department of personnel which keep tabs on select civil servants, and their choice for higher positions]

However, career & service obligation don't always necessarily arise in conflict in public interest over political interest might strike political extremism:

Marginalization of or [illegible] of idelable civil servants ex. Ashok Khanna - multiple grounds
Private of numerous civil servants ex. [illegible] - took civil servants [illegible] without expectation in return

Although, it's possible to reconcile both career & service obligation in some of dishonesty, public service obligation should take primacy over career obligations.

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Suggested & complicated by civil society organizations, NGOs, etc.

4The media too urges their admirable suffers service and project them as a role model for younger generation.
5There are sufficient internal mechanism within service itself like selection committees, department of personnel which keep tab on select civil servants & choose them for higher position

However, career & service obligation doesn't always necessarily

arise in public interest over political interest might strike political extremism
Marginalization of or [illegible] of idealable civil servants ex. Ashok Khanna - multiple grounds
Private of numerous civil servants ex. [illegible] - took civil servants [illegible] without expectation in return

Although, it's possible to reconcile both career & service obligation in some of dishonesty, public service obligation should take primacy over career obligations.

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Conclusion

Public service obligation should take primacy over career obligations.

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  • Use of Indian philosophical foundation (Ramakrishna Mission motto)
  • Structured approach with numbered points
  • Recognition of government recognition system for public servants
  • Mentions specific cases and mechanisms

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Topper

Sachin

Subject & Paper

GS4GS1

Topic

Civil Service Ethics

Career versus Service Obligation

Reconciliation of Professional and Public Interest

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360

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10

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5

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