Introduction
Eastern UP, Bihar, Bengal lagged behind in agricultural productivity.
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Main Body
2Inter-Personal Disparities - between farmer communities => widening of inequalities between individual farmers.
3Ecological disequilibrium due to ground water depletion, pollution, soil saline action, deforestation etc.
4Social inequalities => greater division of caste and gender lines in areas of green revolution.
Therefore, the success of green revolution were overshadowed by its shortcomings, demanding the need for 'Evergreen Revolution'.
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- Clear enumeration of problems
- Logical flow from agriculture-related issues to environmental concerns
- Concluding statement connects to need for reform
Topper
Ritika Chitlangia
Subject & Paper
GS1GS1
Topic
Modern Indian History
Freedom Struggle - JP Movement
JP Movement flaws and composition
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70
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