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Ritika Chitlangia

GS2GS1

World War I - Race between European colonialism and imperialism; Russia's forging of alliances with its enemies like France and Britain; Lack of any organization to peacefully mitigate the WW1; World War II - Policy of appeasement followed by buildin of France; Redundancy and ineffectiveness of the League of Nations; USA's apportionment → did not join the League of Nations; Therefore, Germany can be held responsible to a large extent for the two world wars, but Germany's actions were instigated by a deeper European crisis.

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Main Body

Two were the two World Wars were not solely the outer me of Germany's Nations.

World War I

1Race between European colonialism and imperialism.
2Russia's forging of alliances with its enemies tel France and Britain.
3Lack of any organisation to peacefully mitigate the WW1.

World War II

1Policy of appeasement followed by buildin of France.
2Redundancy and ineffectiveness of the league of Nations.
3USA's apportionment → did not join the league of Nations.

Therefore, Germany can be held responsible to a large extent for the two waves, but Germany's actions were instigated by a deeper European crisis.

103 words4 paragraphs
  • Well-organized bullet point structure
  • Connects multiple causes across both world wars
  • Acknowledges complexity of German responsibility

Topper

Ritika Chitlangia

Subject & Paper

GS2GS1

Topic

History of the World

World Wars

Causes of World War I and II

Writing Stats

103

Total words

4

Paragraphs

analytical and structured

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