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Rishabh YadavAIR 132

Question Q.10DiscussGS1GS1

Discuss how social media is reshaping identity formation and self-worth among adolescents in contemporary Indian society.

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Introduction

With growing internet penetration and increasing availability of smart phones, social media has become indispensable.

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Main Body

Positive effects of social media
1more acceptance of one's identity including body type, skin tone et.
2growing acceptance of diversity → Indian song "Welcome" recognised internationally.
3Increasing tolerance → of different practices according to one's religion
4New New aspects → like individualism and nationality are being adopted
Negative aspects
1Increase in body shaming and bullying → seeing once body with disgust
2Hoard to copy celebratory skin → Korean glass skin craze
3Increasing distance from one's values → trying to fit into western pop-culture.
4usage of slangs like 'cello' and 'cohats-up' instead of a recognised salutations.
5more identification with west

Thus, soft media social media is having both aspects. If used positively can help in positive image creation.

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Conclusion

Thus, soft media social media is having both aspects. If used positively can help in positive image creation.

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  • Clear introduction establishing relevance
  • Specific example provided (Indian song 'Welcome')
  • Links social media to cultural acceptance

Topper

Rishabh Yadav

AIR 132

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Effects of Globalization on Indian society

Globalisation and technology

Social media impact on identity formation and adolescents

Writing Stats

161

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