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Rishabh SharmaAIR 116

Question Q.8GS1GS1

The disproportionate preference for government jobs in certain Indian states is not merely a matter of personal aspiration. Analyze.

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Introduction

The unemployment among Indian youth is much more than the average unemployment rate which virtually pushes them towards government job exams.

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Main Body

Government Jobs obsession not a personal aspiration solely

1Absence of opportunities in the private sector
2Low employability of youth as per market standard. Ex - only 37% of graduates employable (India Skills Report)
3Pressure of expectations of parents
4Charm of government jobs as superior - colonial hangover
5Low education outcomes leaves the students with no other option.
6Social media glorifying the government jobs. Ex - Royal Entry videos, 'Red/Blue Bath' culture
7Narrative spread by the grand coaching industry who milk the vulnerability of youth.

However,

Home entry preparation personally too

Aptive to bring impact in society

Leave high paying jobs for government service

Ex - IAS, Adiraj

Government must work to channelise the youth in right direction.

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Conclusion

Government must work to channelise the youth in right direction.

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  • Comprehensive analysis with multiple factors identified
  • Referenced India Skills Report with specific statistic (37%)
  • Discussed social media's role in shaping narratives
  • Mentioned coaching industry's role in perpetuating the obsession
  • Provided counter-examples of individuals leaving private jobs for government service
  • Acknowledged psychological and social pressures

Topper

Rishabh Sharma

AIR 116

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Salient features of Indian Society, Diversity of India

Role of Women and Women's Organization, Population and Associated Issues, Poverty and Developmental issues

Unemployment and aspiration among youth

Writing Stats

156

Total words

3

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