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RakhiAIR 65

Discuss the role of media in forming new social connections and its relevance to modern societyGS1GS1

Media forming new connections

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Introduction

Media, forming new connections

4 words

Main Body

1Easy for part time jobs - Making them independent at early age
2Better awareness of social realities - as easy for mixing with different cultures and thus see in unity in diversity concept

Yet challenges remain

(a) Distance from reality - family bonds generating onsite could

(b) Fear of missing out - succumbing to peer pressure

(c) Depression & Anxiety - due to conspicuous display of wealth and using regularly

Thus need is for maintaining a balance, where traditions are not left for modernization and promote harmony in heart as well as in home, leading to ultimate happiness

100 words3 paragraphs

Conclusion

Thus need is for maintaining a balance, where traditions are not left for modernization and promote harmony in heart as well as in home, leading to ultimate happiness

28 words

  • Identifies both positive impacts (independence, awareness) and negative impacts (mental health issues)
  • Addresses the balance needed between tradition and modernization
  • Mentions concrete challenges like FOMO and peer pressure
  • Concludes with a holistic perspective on harmony

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Topper

Rakhi

AIR 65

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Effects of Globalization on Indian society

Globalisation and technology

Media and social connections in modern society

Writing Stats

132

Total words

3

Paragraphs

Analytical and reflective

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