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Rishabh ChoudharyAIR 28

Question Q.9GS1GS1

Indian society is premised on some common values that give it a composite texture as well as some diverse practices that deepen its [political] Capacitate.

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Introduction

Indian society is viewed as having a unique composite character. As Madan said —

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Main Body

Indian society is viewed as uniquely different from other countries in that all other country are pamphlets, while India is only [millionaires].

Premised on [Common values]:

1Pluralism – Article 25-28 of Constitution
2Tolerance and multiculturalism is cases of joint celebration of Diwali, Christmas, Holi — All National holidays.

Gives it [composite structure]

Preserve of all religion co-existing together. (Lindale failure of Laïcité in France)
Tribal diversity and ensuring tribal practices (Practices at festival of Baste, Bali, Jatra)
Co-existence of multiple languages [in 22 official languages in 8th Schedule].

[Gives it diverse practices]

Promote regional identities
Promote multiple preaches of beliefs and worship
empowers minorities to setup educational institutions
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Conclusion

India's diversity is a inheritance We should all cherish and cultivate nurture.

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  • Well-structured with clear categorization of values and practices
  • Good use of constitutional references
  • Examples from diverse cultural practices

Topper

Rishabh Choudhary

AIR 28

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Salient features of Indian Society, Diversity of India

Diversity of India

Composite character of Indian society

Writing Stats

142

Total words

12

Paragraphs

formal, descriptive

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