Question Q.1DiscussGS2GS1

Discuss the effects of globalization on the youth in India. (10 marks, 150 words)

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Introduction

Globalization defines itself as 'time and space compression that has made all world into a global timeframe.'

17 words

Main Body

Positive effects of globalization on youth:

1Better job opportunities at MNCs

2Global identification with issues; Metro link

3Better environmental consciousness; Quota marking for eco-friendly cars

4Political awareness on global issues; Bangladesh NGO/WTO/Crisis

5Better health facilities; Contraleptive care

Negative effects of globalization on youth:

1Lecture of me purely; Neoliberalization of family

2Drugs, alcohol by induced effect

3Erosion of classical art; For pop music types, etc

4Sense of cultural-shout isolation, inferiority

5Mental pressure for performance pressure; Suicide sale [illegible]

Thus, the double-edged sword of globalization must be navigated carefully to benefit the demographic dividend of our youth.

105 words3 paragraphs

Conclusion

Thus, the double-edged sword of globalization must be navigated carefully to benefit the demographic dividend of our youth.

18 words

Diagram

Mind map showing negative effects of globalization with branches for lecture, neoliberalization, drugs/alcohol, erosion of classical art, and mental pressure

Structured approach with clear positive and negative effects
Use of examples and specific references
Diagrammatic representation of effects
Attempts to provide conclusion

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Topper

Poorva Agrawal

AIR 652024

Subject & Paper

GS2GS1

Topic

Effects of Globalization on Indian society

Globalisation and youth

Impact of globalization on youth

Writing Stats

140

Total words

Paragraphs

Analytical

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