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Poorva AgrawalAIR 65· 2024

Explain how diversity has enriched Indian societyGS1GS1

Diversity is bar greatest strength. In light of the statement, explain how diversity has enriched Indian society. (10 marks, 150 words)

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Introduction

Unity in diversity has been the guiding pillar of Indian society since ancient times.

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Main Body

Tenet of diversity in enriching society's strengthening it—

① Greater persistence to studies Indian culture has remained multiple manifestation amidst culture.

② Unified cultural practices—

④ Gaya - Tamilnadu school.

③ Built done, Tolerance to culture-

④ Kushanas culture adapted manifest.

④ Common serve of belongingness due to continuous preservation of values.

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57 words6 paragraphs
  • Opens with strong thematic statement on unity in diversity
  • Attempts to link diversity to social strength
  • Mentions regional variations (Gaya, Tamil Nadu)
  • Connects cultural tolerance to belongingness

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Poorva Agrawal

AIR 652024

Subject & Paper

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Topic

Salient features of Indian Society, Diversity of India

Diversity of Indian Society

Cultural diversity and social harmony

Writing Stats

71

Total words

6

Paragraphs

analytical but fragmented

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