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NausheenAIR 9

Question Q18GS2GS1

हमारे समाज में परंपरائें क्यों बाधित करती है? परंपरा सामाजिक-कानूनी मुद्दों को शामिल करने वाली सामाजिक विधान कितनी प्रभावी है? (निर्दिष्ट कीजिए। - Why do traditions in our society impede change? To what extent can social legislation be instrumental against old customary practices? (Answer in 250 words) 15 Marks

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Introduction

Indian society is based on the values of modernism and traditionalism, with greater emphasis on the latter.

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Main Body

Social legislations [are] instrumental in changing the traditional norms.

Traditions impeding change:

(i) changes are seen as a threat to cultural practices. eg) Akbarham temple doesn't allow carrying mobile phones.

(ii) they are rigid in nature. eg) familial structure

(iii) they are mostly preserved by the elders who are resistant to changes eg) acceptance of digital technology

There reasons:

(i) traditions are based on religion which is again based on scriptures which is fixed.

(ii) Sharia laws

(iii) they are seen as an integral part of society. eg) Jallika[taite]

Social legislations in changing age, old practices:

(i) Women empowerment eg) women's entry in Kumbaili, Haj Ali Dargah by S.C.

(ii) legislations by personal religious boards eg) All India Muslim Law Board recently announced access to women to all masjids.

(iii) by bringing equality. eg) Madras H.C. ruled that temple priest need not necessarily be a Brahmin (secular function)

(i) brings in change in legal space. eg) criminalization of untouchability.

(ii) political will is shown. eg) clearer for UCC.

(iii) persuading and forcing people to using in a change. eg) equality to women

They aren't instrumental:

(i) creates rigid oppositionraising instability. eg) tribal groups offering UCC.

(ii) they might change their ways. eg) discrimination in personal space

(iii) no change in emotions towards particular class. eg) consumption of manual scavengingsuicides by lff [illegible]
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Conclusion

therefore, social legislations need to be merged with persuasion for bringing in change in [illegible] .

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  • comprehensive coverage of traditions impeding change
  • good use of examples
  • structured approach with sub-topics
  • discussion of both effectiveness and limitations of social legislation

Topper

Nausheen

AIR 9

Subject & Paper

GS2GS1

Topic

Social Issues

Role of Women and Social Legislation

Traditions impeding change and social legislation

Writing Stats

259

Total words

6

Paragraphs

analytical with structured sub-points

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