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Nidhi GoyalAIR 91

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Introduction

Russian Revolution of 1917 was an important watershed movement in world history.

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Main Body

Factors:

1Political crisis
Incapable style of runningLack of political rights with large number of peoplefeudalism.
2Economic crisis
Warfirst world wartool toll on economic resources
Lack of development of industries and thus lack of employment.
3Social crisis
Wide social inequality between capitalist people & wealth class.
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Conclusion

Consequences: ↓ Overthrow of Tsar of Russia & non-Russian nationalities ↓ Right of self-determination to frame constituted ↓ Formation of Soviet Union ↓ Era of Socialism → economic planning ↓ Land to tille and control of factories to workers ↓ Inspired socialism in other countries as well ↓ Championed fight against colonisation ↓ Influence on Indian national movement: - Soviet Union in appeal of decolonization - Socialist ideas in India - Freedom Struggle - Formation of Trade Unions & Farmers Organising - Reducing hegemony of European power. Russian revolution inspired national movement with ideas of justice & self-determination.

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  • Clear identification of the three main crises leading to revolution
  • Good connection between Russian Revolution and Indian independence movement
  • Comprehensive coverage of consequences and global influence
  • Links revolution to broader anti-colonial and socialist movements

Topper

Nidhi Goyal

AIR 91

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

History of the World

World Wars and Redrawal of National Boundaries

Russian Revolution of 1917

Writing Stats

167

Total words

4

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Structured analytical approach

Tone