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MEGHNA CHAKARAVORTYAIR 79

Question 9GS1GS1

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Introduction

Globalization refers to the massive interdependence, interactions and integration in the world through flows of goods, services, technology, investment etc.

20 words

Main Body

Effects on the youth in India:

(i) Increased educational opportunities - Large no. of Indian students in USA, Canada etc

(ii) Increasing employment opportunities - Hard Data Point: 200/. increase in income after migration, others

(iii) Technology even provides cultured exposure - Positive, domestic attitudes towards women

(iv) Improved & choice in goods, services

But there are many negative effects:

(i) Increasing individualism - through Westernization in culture - HTTP across global Loveless Epidemic - ageing parents

(ii) Consumerism- there is at the aspirational value leads to poor health outcomes - Increasing E-waste - Indian top nation

(iii) Loss Confusion in identity - national &s ethnic is cosmopolitan identity

(iv) Inequality, increased competition - few limited jobs in top companies - otherwise vast informal sector

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Conclusion

Hence globalization needs a policy approach in India that can address their ill-effects (Amartya Sen)

15 words

  • Clear enumeration of positive effects
  • Specific examples (USA, Canada)
  • Acknowledges both benefits and negative impacts
  • Data point included

Topper

MEGHNA CHAKARAVORTY

AIR 79

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Effects of Globalization on Indian society

Globalisation and technology

Youth and Employment

Writing Stats

160

Total words

10

Paragraphs

structured with examples

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