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LAKSHAY AGGARWALAIR 164

Question Q.9Critically examineGS2GS1

Critically examine the effects of globalization on the youth in India.

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Introduction

Globalisation refers to intense integration of global social relations, gulf that happening in one part of world effect our own land.

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Main Body

Issuing with globalization's effects on Indian youth:

disconnect from traditional values (rise of individualism, disintegration of family values, only 20% joint family is India - census 2011)
rise in mental health issue (western hustle culture - 9 to 5 jobs, office white collar slavery)
obsession to STEM discipline (by 41% suicide less than 30 years of age - NCRB)
problem of radicalization (use of social media to recruit Kerala Jihadis youth)
Brain Drain (woolly to western culture and country)
Decline in respect towards relationship (rise in hookup culture, increasing divorce rates)
Changing social values (rise in selfishness)

However some positive effects case seen too:

Youth propagating Indian culture abroad, increased Indian culture awareness, obsessed to STEM discipline

Continuation of negative effects: problem of radicalization (use of social media to recruit Kerala Jihadis youth), Brain Drain (woolly to western culture and country), Decline in respect towards relationship (rise in hookup culture, increasing divorce rates), Changing social values (rise in selfishness).

Positive effects: Youth propagating Indian culture abroad, increased Indian culture awareness, obsessed to STEM discipline.

Alluring winning (Bollywood channeling)
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Conclusion

Hence, globalization is a mixed bag of pluses and minuses

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  • good attempt to balance negative and positive effects
  • use of statistical data (census 2011, NCRB data)
  • multiple dimensions covered (family, mental health, career, relationships)

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LAKSHAY AGGARWAL

AIR 164

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Topic

Effects of Globalization on Indian society

Globalisation and youth

Negative and positive effects of globalization on Indian youth

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218

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9

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analytical

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