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Kush MotwaniAIR 11

Question 19EvaluateGS1GS1

Do you think that the forces of modernization that catalyzed the eradication of social evils in Indian society have also threatened our cultural values and ethos? (Answer in 150 words) 15 marks

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Introduction

Globalization and internal reform processes in our society have significantly catalyzed eradication of social evils, however, to some extent, have also threatened our cultural values.

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Main Body

eradication of social evils

forces of modernization:

1. women empowerment -> level evils eradicated / progress made.

-> lack of agency to women

(eg) women GER now higher than male GER at all levels of education

-> combated child marriage, dowry, etc

-> property rights to women (significantly)

-> stricter action for sexual violence

2. Technology

-> democratization of info

-> access of opportunities to marginalized communities

(eg:) technology such as hearing aids, braille, etc is leading to gradual integration of disabled

3. UP4 reforms -> broke link between occupation and caste

-> single biggest caste reform event in India

-> led to social mobility

4. emerging attitudes towards marriage, gender, etc

-> right to choose partner

(eg) Transgender Protection Act 2019

However, forces of modernization threatening our cultural values

1. "Blind westernization"

misunderstanding that modernization is the same as westernization

2. adoption of evils of alcoholism, drug abuse, etc

3. decline in standards of art and culture

traditional art under decline, no new innovation simply copying from west, reverting to abusive language etc to get viewership

(eg:) children today know about characters of Avengers movie, but not Amar Chitra Katha.

4. rising materialism and consumption -> decline of spiritual pursuits

5. rising divorce rates -> reducing sanctity of marriage

6. adoption of western foods -> unhealthy -> leading to obesity

7. loss of tolerance - inspired by western homogenization of culture

"cancel culture"

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Conclusion

Thus, we need to minimize the ill effects, modernize without westernizing, as the issues are due to westernization, not modernization

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Diagram

Two column headers: 'eradication of social evils' and 'forces of modernization' with flow arrows showing women empowerment leading to various social reforms

  • clear thesis statement
  • use of data point on GER

Topper

Kush Motwani

AIR 11

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Effects of Globalization on Indian society

Globalisation and culture

Modernization vs cultural values

Writing Stats

279

Total words

12

Paragraphs

analytical, point-wise

Tone