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BHAVESH JALPANAIR 128· 2024

Question Q.10ElaborateGS1GS1

The recognition of LGBTQ rights in India marks significant progress, but the journey towards full societal integration and acceptance remains arduous, necessitating a profound socio-cultural shift. Elaborate

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Introduction

Supreme Court in several judgements like Navtej Singh Johar case have given greater recognition to LGBTQ rights.

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Main Body

Progress in India:

Recognition of 3rd gender

Opens up economic opportunities in government sector
Greater bodily autonomy
Same-sex consumed sex recognized as fundamental right
Improving participation in politics

Body likes in Delhi MCD

Challenges:

Improved social awareness
Participation in pride marches
Corporates organizing Bridemart
However, remains care, help-backed

Non-recognition to same-sex marriage

Propagation of myths to society of social exclusion
Threats to sexual security and violence against them
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Conclusion

As Justice Sudin Malhotra said, justice will be served when queer justice is found on the bench. Need trans-gender judges.

20 words

  • Cited relevant Supreme Court judgment
  • Structured discussion of progress and challenges
  • Mentioned concrete examples (Delhi MCD, pride marches)
  • Used judicial quote effectively

Topper

BHAVESH JALPAN

AIR 1282024

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Role of Women and Women's Organization, Population and Associated Issues, Poverty and Developmental issues

Women

LGBTQ rights and societal integration

Writing Stats

115

Total words

4

Paragraphs

Balanced and critical

Tone