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[Context/Draft notes on positive and negative aspects of modern socialization and family structures]
Main Body
Positive aspects:
1Families having less body load have more attention given to kids
2Online specialization via social media
Negative aspects:
1Both parents working > less time for kids > new generation of I-pad kids
2Decline in social skills due to our emphasis on online education, socialization site
3Radicalization on social media [monosphere] promoting toxic masculinity
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Conclusion
Addressing youth & elderly issue is crucial to protect India's future
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- Identifies both positive and negative impacts of modernization
- Connects online technology to social skills decline
- Recognizes radicalization as contemporary concern
- Links family structure changes to generational impacts
Topper
Aryan Yadav
AIR 31
Subject & Paper
GS1GS1
Topic
Salient features of Indian Society, Diversity of India
Role of Women and Women's Organization, Population and Associated Issues, Poverty and Developmental issues, Urbanization, their problems and their remedies
Globalisation and technology
Writing Stats
71
Total words
2
Paragraphs
analytical, point-form
Tone