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Ashi Sharma

Question Q2Discuss impact and analyze limitationsGS1GS1

[Inferred: Discuss the socio-religious reforms of the 20th century and their role in formation of women organizations; analyze impact and limitations]

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Introduction

the socio-religious reforms of the 20th century aided an impetus for formation of women organizations to fight for gender equality.

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Main Body

Impact - Positive:

1Organizations like Sharad Unee, Arya Samaj, Ladies Social Conference and All India women's conference greatly helped in mobilising and empowering women
2they raised key issues s.the widow remarriage, Sati-bandeth, female infanticide, education of girl child etc.
3raised nationalistic sentiments amongst women facilitating their participation in the freedom struggle.

Limitations:

1most organizations were based in urban areas and had little representation from rural areas.
2most women members & leaders followed

no high caste & high class (4) Bramhila Ramabai Pandey and had little awareness against the concerns of women from backward and underprivileged communities (e) Sati medium of communication was often English, further alienating ordinary women.

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Conclusion

Therefore, though pro-independence women organizations had more intense effects/equaled limited to their limited representative -ness.

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  • Clear structure with Impact and Limitations sections
  • Specific organizations mentioned with their roles
  • Links to broader freedom struggle
  • Identifies specific issues addressed

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Ashi Sharma

Subject & Paper

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Topic

Salient features of Indian Society

Role of Women and Women's Organization

Women's organizations in socio-religious reform

Writing Stats

148

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2

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analytical and structured

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