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Anshul BhattAIR 22· 2023

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Discuss India's unity in diversity

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Introduction

Jawahar Lal Nehru in his book 'Discovery of India' writes that 'India's diversity is united at a very fundamental level'.

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Main Body

Factors leading to unity in diversity include:

* Value of diversity and acceptance with diversity in Language (Indo-Aryan ancestry), Ethnic, Cultural, Religious, Geographical

* Philosophical concepts lying in Thirukural, Upanishad - Vasudhaiva Kusumbakam (the world is one family) and Ekam sat vipra bahuya pane (truth is one, sages call it by many names)

* Religion as unifying force - people from North to South worship some gods

* Role of Bhakti Saints - Upa Kabin, Namdevi et cetera wandered all over India and united people

* Cultural festivals and fairs - by Kumkum and pilgrimage to 4 Dhami in 4 corners of body

* Role of common language like English and Hindi

* Migration for economic opportunity

* Modern means of transportation and communication

* Historical reason like political unity under Mauryan, Mughal and British

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Conclusion

According to Shashi Tharoor, India's diversity is like a 'Columbian Thali' which makes a delicious meal.

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  • Well-structured with multiple factors
  • Use of philosophical concepts and quotes
  • Reference to historical unification under empires
  • Metaphor of Columbian Thali is apt and memorable
  • Covers religious, cultural, linguistic and geographical dimensions

Topper

Anshul Bhatt

AIR 222023

Subject & Paper

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Topic

Salient features of Indian Society, Diversity of India

Unity in Diversity

Writing Stats

171

Total words

10

Paragraphs

9

Bullets

Analytical and philosophical

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