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Anjali ThakurAIR 43· 2023

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Do you think that the forces of modernization that catalyzed the eradication of social evils in Indian society have also threatened our cultural values and ethos? (Answer in 150 words) 15 marks.

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Introduction

Modernization started by British through western english education, has today got new shape through globalization and digitization

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Main Body

Force of modernization catalyzing eradication of social evils:

1. Women subjugation

Earlier -> forces by Rajaram Mohan Roy, Ishwarchandra Vidyasagar etc. eg> Sati Abolition Act 1829

Now -> Modern education -> GER of women is higher than men (27.1%) in higher education.

-> No to Purdah Pratha

-> less domestication -> participating in external market Economy.

2. Caste discrimination -> earlier by Ambedkar, Gandhiji, Phule etc. eg> All India Anti-Untouchability league

Modernization now has provided new system: Digitization -> Gig Economy participation; Urbanization -> Jobs without caste consciousness eg common travel in metro, eg> Former President was from Dalit Community -> modernization has provided social mobility

3. Tribal upliftment -> Eklavya model school -> social media, Reservation (3rd in panchayat, Art 243D) eg> Warli Tribe sell their Art online. -> gaining wide recognition.

4. Modernization => Reduced faeticides -> notion of purity & pollution has reduced beliefs/works like witchcraft, blackmagic, Bali(sacrifice) etc have eradicated.

5. Secularization has happened eg> Secularism in constitution.

Modernization threatening values & ethos:

1. Reducing collective orientation -> more individualization (Nuclearization of family)

2. Religious Revivalism/fundamentalism eg> Propaganda using social media.

3. Blind Imitation of westernization eg> More status attaching to English than vernacular Education.

4. Consumerism and materialistic culture against our spiritual culture eg> Prestige attached with car.

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Conclusion

Despite some challenges Modernization has brought rationality and thus further promoting "NEW INDIA"

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  • Historical context well established
  • Data usage (GER 27.1%)
  • Clear structure

Topper

Anjali Thakur

AIR 432023

Subject & Paper

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Topic

Effects of Globalization on Indian society

Modernization and social evils

Globalisation and culture

Writing Stats

244

Total words

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Paragraphs

structured, analytical

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