Question 20GS1GS1

भारत-भूमंडलीकरण ने भारत में बच्चों के लिए नई अवसरों के साथ-साथ चुनौतियां भी उत्पन्न की हैं। परीक्षण कीजिए। Globalisation has brought new opportunities as well as challenges for children in India. Examine. (Answer in 250 words)

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Introduction

Globalisation after it the process of shrinking of time and space leading to interchange of ideas goods and people.

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Main Body

Opportunities for children from globalisation :

1Global exposure to education and learning 9 courage provide course from best mentors around world.

2Modern value inculcation like nationalism, scientific temperament et leading to innovative & child entrepreneurs.

3Access to technology like social media causing interaction with diverse people => upright during new => tolerance.

6girl child ensrue value of equality thereby empowering her to drive by & experi to role models like Gita Gopinath (IMF).

6Raise voice against injustice/violence 9 # MeToo against child rape

Challenges for children :

1Online harassment as seen in case of cyber bullying / stalking.

2exposure to sensitive content like child pornography leading to objectification of women.

3Cultural alienation caused due to disconnect with Indian values/ethos & celebrating friendship day over Rakhi.

These negative effects of globalisation need to be tackled through greater parent-child interacting, use of regulatory powers by government (& child locks) and awareness generation among children.

7Lovability empowerment with peace on faced needs, leading to loss of confidence.

8exposure to harmful gases causing attention deficit 9 blue whale challenge, [illegible]

6Strengthen marches of deprived leading to perpetual disappointment causing anxiety.

7Wrong value inculcation through OTT platform majority of objectification of women.

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Conclusion

These negative effects of globalisation need to be tackled through greater parent-child interacting, use of regulatory powers by government (& child locks) and awareness generation among children.

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Balanced approach with opportunities and challenges
Contemporary examples with Gita Gopinath and MeToo
Covers both positive and negative aspects

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Topper

Animesh Jain

AIR 63

Subject & Paper

GS1GS1

Topic

Salient features of Indian Society

Effects of Globalization on Indian society

Globalisation and children

Writing Stats

255

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Paragraphs

analytical formal

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