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Anjali ThakurAIR 43· 2023

Question 12GS1GS1

England's Industrial Revolution not only transformed the economic landscape but also had far-reaching social and cultural impacts. Discuss.

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Introduction

Industrial Revolution was firstly came in 18th century Europe (England) due to many factors like high investment about available, Renaissance etc.

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Main Body

Transformed the economic landscape:

1many new inventions occurred for spinning mule & spinning jenny (1764)
2Factory sys was evolved through invention of waterframe.
3Connectivity was taken care of - metal Roads, Railway, waterway & navigation
4Communication advancements - Telephone - Graham Bell.
5New industries - Cotton weaving factory
6Integration of economy with the world.
Quinine, Cocoa et from S.America - Labour from Africa
Raw material like cotton, indigo etc from India

[Social impacts]

1Industrialization → Source of livelihood to people.
2Changed the prevalent mode of production → Capitalist feudalism to Capitalism.
3Urbanization → Inflamed cities → Repository of misery
4Huge migration → Unhygienic residence & slums
5Human indicators suffered: Low education, Health, Child labour, Disease outbreaks
6Women - his menstrual hygiene, Domestic violence. No privacy & security duties in slums.

[Cultural impact]

1Breaking the jatra/norm - Nuclear family
2Traditional ties and kinship relation got weakened.
3less focus on cultural sphere - church attendance

this also impacted the colonised country - partial modernization - social movement - Poverty & exploitation of people - impoverished farmers - labour trade etc.

thus england's industrial revolution had wide impact which later seen as Industrialization race - today NR 4 D is about to come.

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Conclusion

Thus england's industrial revolution had wide impact which later seen as Industrialization race - today NR 4 D is about to come.

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  • Lists major technological innovations
  • Mentions key inventions with dates
  • Addresses multiple dimensions of revolution

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Topper

Anjali Thakur

AIR 432023

Subject & Paper

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Topic

History of the World

Industrial Revolution

Industrial Revolution in England - economic and technological transformation

Writing Stats

260

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5

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2

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expository

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